Wednesday, January 18, 2012

henkō shita watashi no saisho no ai 1.1

Manga-line Stories.

My First Love Changed / “Henkō shita watashi no saisho no ai”
Alternate name: Change my first love “Watashi no hatsukoi o henkō suru”
Characters: Toru Hinode, Mizuki Hinode, Sekai Moto, Kyosuke Touya, & Taichi Minori

The cold weather peps through the rosy flowers along the road while the birds are pealing through the trees. Here I was sitting at the corner of the Omamori Park waiting for about an hour. I glanced at my wristwatch which was given by my mom and gazed if he was about to come.“I guess, I was too early...”

Honestly, I am TOO early for my DATE. Yep! My long-awaited date with my Hubby Mizuki! Well at first, we had difficulties but then again we got married for about a month now. A newlywed couple. I always fascinate every day. Always asking myself if I am dreaming. One time I even ask my sister to slap my face if it is true. But yeah, it was TRUE. All of these now aren’t dreams. All of these are reality.


“Aya! I’m so lucky to have MIzuki!” Tonight, I’m so overflowing of excitement. “Heh…What should we do after this?” Thinking maybe we should stop being newlyweds. And continue to be a MARRIED couple now. Well, for this kind of occasion. I dress up myself so that Mizuki will be head over heels on me. I wore a furred-brown clothing and an inner black satin dress. Her hair was fixed up-do and her make-up was just right for her special day. She looked at her wristwatch and it was already 8 o’ clock in the evening. Then she chafed and clasped her hands that create heat on her palms to make her warm. She looked sides to sides to see if Mizuki was around. There she saw couples holding hands and women smiling so gracefully to their husbands. “Oh! How I wish we can be like that!!!” she thought and blushed. “aya! I can’t wait!” “Yeee! Mizuki Hubby! Yosh! That will be the plan! PIN HIM DOWN! HA-HA-HA!” “Mom! Look there’s a weird woman at the corner!” said the boy clinging unto his mom. “Don’t stare at her! She’s a crazy woman! C’mon!” His mother dragged his son away from her. “Eh! C-Crazy? Me.?”


She peaked at her bag to check if her present was there. It was cute pink box with a note attached. Excitement was all over her. Thinking what should they do after their long-awaited date. “I can’t think anymore! …No! You mustn’t!” She monologues. “Mizuki is like a gentle-fragile vase that can’t be touched by wild claws and BITTEN BY A SHARP FANGS-!” She noticed people staring at her. “Heh…Fangs! Movie! Twilight! Haha! Love that movie!” she said while getting herself out of there. So embarrassing!Then she glanced through the park and saw a boy crying alone without a companion. Then she came towards the boy and calms him down. “Poor kid…why are you crying alone?...” she asked the boy who cried a lot. “Hic…I’m lost…hic…I don’t know where my mom went…hic…and now- waaaaaaaaah~~!” “it’s alright! Its alright! Onee-chan is here!...”she steeply pats his head then the boy calm down. “good boy!...what’s your name?”she asked. “sa…sayu…” the boy answered anxiously. “well,sayu-kun…I’m toru onee-chan…”she smiled. “don’t worry, I won’t leave you, okay?” “o..okay…” she bowed his head. “tha-thank you…toru onee-chan…” he said timidly. And she pats his head so the boy won’t feel scared anymore. Then a woman came towards them and claimed his son. “Mom!...”said the boy jumped over his mother. “oh my! I was worried about you…” his mother said who was worried for his son. “are you alright??...” “yes mom! Onee-chan here comforted me!” the boy smiled joyfully. “really?!...”she looked at toru. “Oh my! Thank you for comforting him for me for awhile..” “no…ahm..it was nothing. Because I just saw him crying alone…so I think I should go for him. That’s all!” she replied hesitantly. “Oh my! Thank you again! I think you’re a mom like me?!” “me? A mother?... no!.not yet-whisper-” she laughed. “I see…well, we should go now…say bye to onee-chan sayu-kun.” Her mother asked him. Then the boy nodded and said his good bye to her and hugged her and she waved them farewell. She saw the boy’s family was complete with parents. She remembered her parents as well who passed away when she was young. And then she smiled. Then she looked up on her wristwatch and it was already 8:47 in the evening. And still no sign of Mizuki but still hopes to wait for him. 


At the other side, Mizuki was hurrying his way to the park. He looked at his wristwatch and it was already 8:49. Then he was called by his old colleagues. “Mi-Zu-Ki~~~!!!” shouted by his one of his gay guy friends named Sekai. “eh?! Who called-?” he looked around and spotted sekai and the others. “mizuki?!! How are you!?” they greeted him happily. “ah! You guys! How are you?!” he greeted them back. “we missed you! Hey! Let’s hang around!” sekai said. “I would love to…but!” he refused their offer but one if his friends insisted. “why are you such in a hurry?” Kyosuke asked him unhesistantly. “you see…toru is waiting for me…at the park.” He said. “toru?... Toru fujimoto?”Taichi asked. And he nodded. “oh! That…that delinquent from F class!” sekai said. “yes! That beastly girl!” taichi said. “she’s such a burden…” kyosuke added. “ahm…toru isn’t what you think of her…” mizuki contrasted them shyly. “eh?! You’re protecting her now? What does that girl DID to you to marry her!? Huh?”sekai asked him abruptly. “huh? She did..nothing.” he said thinking deeply. “I heard she’s the one who proposed to you…am I right?!” they said and chuckled. “ahm…that…” he replied and thought it was true that toru was the one who proposed to him. “see!” they laughed. “she’s so desperate!” and they continued backstabbing her and laughed. “ahm! I’d better go now! Bye-!” he walked away but then they stopped him and offered him to hang out for awhile. “hey! We didn’t see each other for a long time. Hang out with us!” “eh?! Uhm..you see…” “what are you two up to tonight anyway?” they asked. “ahm..err..i…don’t know…”he said timidly. “eh?! Then if its not important, then hang out with out with us, instead.! Come on, were going to the host club!” sekai insisted him. “ho-host club?!” mizuki was questionned. “yeaH!!! Hahahaha! Come on!” they said and pulled him into the club. Awhile, toru was still waiting outside the cold street standing on a birch. She was shuddering in the icy breeze but still doesn’t matter because it was the day for their awaited date. And it was already 9:28 in the evening. “I’d better call him right now…” when she was about to call him, he called to her cell. “hello, toru? Are you there?” “oh? Mizuki!!!” “did you wait too long?” “ah..no! I just..ahm…got here…hehehe..” she lied. He sighed. “good..i thought you were waiting for me for hours…” -well, it was true!- “why? Are you near now? I’m in the corner of sunflower street and--” “annoh..toru-chan..i-I’m sorry..i can’t make it tonight…” he said. “eh?! W-why not??!” she was shocked. “my old friends invited me to hang out with them…so…” “old…friends? You mean, those g-g-gay guys?” “um…sekai, kyosuke and taichi!! Err..so, sorry toru…I know I made a promise to you…” “ahm..its okay!”- although its not!- “We can change the day of our date!” -although,she wanted it now!-“have fun!”-although,she wanted him to have fun with her tonight- “really?!...is that alright? I’ll go home straight after this…” he said. “y-yeah…” her voice was shaking. “are you alright toru? Why is your voice shaking?” mizuki asked him shortly. “n-no..i-im alright its just became chilly here…” she said even though she felt like bursting out now. “ahm..okay..take care going home…”he said to her. “y-yes…i..i will..you too..mizuki…”she said to him in a quiet voice that mizuki was the only one who can hear it.. Then she heard someone calling mizuki. “mizuki! Come here now!” “yeah!..” he replied back to sekai. And he went to talk to toru again. “it was sekai..” She didn’t said a word. “ah..toru..are you still there?” he asked her. “y-yeah…im still here…” “uhm…I’ll put down the phone now…” he said to her. “um..yeah..take care…”she said while her hands are shaky. “okay…bye…”he said. He hangs down the phone. “uhm..mizuki!!..I love-” she gasped and she hangs down her phone. Her body was trembling not in cold wind but she felt her body was going to fall apart. She felt her chest is in pain that she wanted to break it to ease the pain. She felt her palms shaky even though she thought it was already frozen to death that she can’t move. And suddenly, she senses something cold running down from her face. It was her tears that flowed down. She began wiping her tears off because she thought it might turn to frosty. Even though she was quavering in cold, she still whispered his name in a warm voice. “…mizuki…” 


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